Rogue Review No. 337 - March 24, 1999

Consanguinity by MichaelD38

M/F, Teen, *

Length: 16,500 words

Objective Analysis: 8 (out of 10)

  Arousal: 3 (out of 5)
  Story: 5 (out of 5)
  Stroke: No

Subjective Analysis: Excellent


  NOTICE

If you are easily offended, not of the requires legal age, or 
material of an erotic nature is illegal where you are, then do not
read what follows.


  SUMMARY

Carolyn brings Shelby, her roommate, home with her from school.  Will
falls for Shelby and trouble ensues.


  COMMENTARY

I found this story to be somewhat arousing.  The sex scenes are 
arousing, but for the most part I found the scenes where Shelby and 
Will are getting to know each other more arousing.

This is a very well composed story.  The characters seem realistic.
They are all dynamic.  The plot is well paced.  I thought the author 
did a good job showing how Will and Carolyn's relationship suffers 
after Shelby enters Will's life.  I was hoping for a different 
ending, but the one the author provided seems logical, although it is
bittersweet.

This is an Excellent story.  There are some arousing scenes, but for 
the most it is the author's skill in relating the tale that make it 
Excellent.  It is possible that showing the sex isn't necessary to 
the plot.  On the other hand, showing Shelby and Will in the sack 
probably made the ending that much more bittersweet.  This is not 
stroke material, so if that's what you are interested in then I 
advise you look elsewhere.


  LINKS

Consanguinity

* http://search.dejanews.com/=gh/getdoc.xp?AN=457915141&fmt=raw [1/5]
* http://search.dejanews.com/=gh/getdoc.xp?AN=457915131&fmt=raw [2/5]
* http://search.dejanews.com/=gh/getdoc.xp?AN=457915121&fmt=raw [3/5]
* http://search.dejanews.com/=gh/getdoc.xp?AN=457915136&fmt=raw [4/5]
* http://search.dejanews.com/=gh/getdoc.xp?AN=457915127&fmt=raw [5/5]

* http://www.qz.to/erotica/assm/Year99/20735.txt [1/5]
* http://www.qz.to/erotica/assm/Year99/20733.txt [2/5]
* http://www.qz.to/erotica/assm/Year99/20731.txt [3/5]
* http://www.qz.to/erotica/assm/Year99/20734.txt [4/5]
* http://www.qz.to/erotica/assm/Year99/20732.txt [5/5]

MichaelD38's Bibliography

* http://www.bitbard.pair.com/library/michaeld/