Rogue Review No. 349 - April 8, 1999

Mousehunt/Dragonslayer by Beltorion

M/F

Length: 5,200 words

Objective Analysis: 9 {out of 10)

  Arousal: 4 (out of 5)
  Story: 5 (out of 5)
  Stroke: Yes

Subjective Analysis: Excellent


  NOTICE

If you are easily offended, not of the required legal age, or
material of an erotic nature is illegal where you are, then do not
read what follows.


  SUMMARY

Late one night a young man, presumably in his twenties, comes to the
rescue of his neighbor, Julie.  She has a mouse scurrying around her
apartment.  The narrator takes care of the mouse and then, with
Julie's approval, claims his reward.


  COMMENTARY

This is a very arousing story.  I liked the soft touches that author
includes.  They make the story more realistic.  The characters seem
to have more on the brain than just rutting.  I think this makes the
story more arousing.

This is a very well written story.  I like both the characters.  They
seem real and not too far fetched.  The plot is a simple one, but I
liked it.  It flows nicely and has enough twists and turns to make it
an enjoyable read.

This is a fun read.  If you like romantic sex stories, then you'll
probably like this one.  I was impressed by both the quality of the
writing and the nature of the story.  It belongs on my A-list.


  LINKS

Mousehunt/Dragonslayer

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