Rogue Review No. 357 - April 18, 1999 Adrenaline Games by DG M/F, NC? Length: 5,500 words Objective Analysis: 9.0 (out of 10) Arousal: 4/5 Plot and Characters: 5/5 Editing: 5/5 Stroke: Yes Subjective Analysis: Excellent NOTICE If you are easily offended, not of the required legal age, or material of an erotic nature is illegal where you are, then do not read what follows. SUMMARY Andrew gets arrested for raping Sarah, his girlfriend. He tells the cops that she asked him to. They don't believe him, so he gives them some of the details. COMMENTARY This is a very arousing story. It is a good mix of plot, characters, and sex. The sex is semi-consensual. Seeing how both Andrew and Sarah give themselves over to passion was very arousing. The story is very well written. The plot is well conceived and flows very nicely. The author uses flashbacks very effectively to allow Andrew to tell his story to the police. The characters, including the cops, all seem real. There is a nice balance struck between plot and character development. I really enjoyed this story. It is very arousing, very well written and very well edited. Unless you are very easily squicked I do not think that the nature of the sex should bother you too much. I have given this story an Excellent, under Subjective Analysis. Even without the graphic details, I think this story is worth reading. Including the graphic details, of course, gives the story a slightly different flavor. LINKS Adrenaline Games * http://search.dejanews.com/=gh/getdoc.xp?AN=297006193&fmt=raw * http://www.qz.to/erotica/assm/Year97/6292.txt DG's Story Page * http://baird.pair.com/dg.htm