Rogue Review No. 369 - May 10, 1999

The Fantasy of Three by Amberle of the Three Rivers

Code(s): F/M, F/M/M

Theme(s): --

Length: 6,000 words

Objective Analysis: 8.5 (out of 10)

  Arousal: 4/5
  Plot and Characters: 4/5
  Editing: 5/5

Subjective Analysis: Very Good


  NOTICE

If you are easily offended, not of the required legal age, or 
material of an erotic nature is illegal where you are, then do not
read what follows.


  SUMMARY

Gwen has the hots for Anthony, her boyfriend's brother.  When Jake, 
her boyfriend, finds out how she feels about Anthony, he delights and
disturbs her by encouraging her to take action.


  COMMENTARY

Both the sex and the foreplay in this story are very hot.  The author
takes her time in building up to the one crucial sex scene.  The 
series of thoughts that go through Gwen's head as she comes closer to
fulfilling her fantasy make the story more arousing.  This is a very 
arousing story.

I liked the characters in this story, Gwen in particular.  The author
does a marvelous job depicting the variety of emotions that Gwen 
experiences.  It made her seem very real to me.  Jake and Anthony 
also seem realistic, but the reader is not put inside of their heads,
so they do not seem quite as complete.  I like the pace of the story 
and the course that it follows; not too fast, not too slow.  This is 
a well written story.

I enjoyed this story quite a bit.  It is very arousing and well 
written.  I can see how some men might not be all that turned on by 
it, but I liked it.  I have given it a Very Good.


  LINKS

The Fantasy of Three

* http://www.deja.com/=gh/getdoc.xp?AN=453731478&fmt=raw [1/5]
* http://www.deja.com/=gh/getdoc.xp?AN=454136815&fmt=raw [2/5]
* http://www.deja.com/=gh/getdoc.xp?AN=456851021&fmt=raw [3/5]
* http://www.deja.com/=gh/getdoc.xp?AN=459653102&fmt=raw [4/5]
* http://www.deja.com/=gh/getdoc.xp?AN=459653104&fmt=raw [5/5]

* http://www.qz.to/erotica/assm/Year99/20475.txt [1/5]
* http://www.qz.to/erotica/assm/Year99/20503.txt [2/5]
* http://www.qz.to/erotica/assm/Year99/20665.txt [3/5]
* http://www.qz.to/erotica/assm/Year99/20796.txt [4/5]
* http://www.qz.to/erotica/assm/Year99/20797.txt [5/5]