Rogue Review No. 374 - May 18, 1999

NOTICE: If you are easily offended, not of the required legal 
age, or material of an erotic nature is illegal where you are, 
then do not read what follows.

TITLE: Bringing Home the Boss 
AUTHOR: Lambchop
LENGTH: 3,700 words
MAIN CHARACTER: Female
COMBINATION(S): Threesome (2 Females, 1 Male)
ORIENTATION(S): Heterosexual (Male, Female)
                Homosexual (Female)
RELATIONSHIP(S): Married Couple
                 Employer-Employee
KINK(S): --
SETTING(S): Home
CAUTION(S): --

SUMMARY: Leslie has become a workaholic.  John, her husband, has 
become a couch potato.  Sharon, her boss, comes up with a plan to
resolve her employee's marital problems.

COMMENTARY: This is a rather direct story, but I still found 
myself aroused by it.  The author does a great job showing the 
evolution of Leslie's feelings as she goes from despair to shock 
to arousal at the proposal her boss makes.  This is a very 
arousing story.

This is a well paced story.  It is obvious where the story is 
going from early on, but it is still a fun ride.  The characters 
are more than adequate for this sort of story.  Each was clearly 
defined and more than just a body.  It would have been nice if 
there was a little more to the plot, but over all this is a well 
written story.

I enjoyed reading this story.  It is both well written and very 
arousing.  This is more of a male fantasy than a female one, so I
may be somewhat biased.  This is an Excellent story.

OBJECTIVE ANALYSIS: 8.5 (out of 10)

         - Arousal: 4/5
         - Editing: 5/5
         - Plot and Characters: 4/5

SUBJECTIVE ANALYSIS: Excellent

LINK(S): Bringing Home the Boss

         - http://www.deja.com/=gh/getdoc.xp?AN=435572569&fmt=raw
         - http://www.qz.to/erotica/assm/Year99/19257.txt

         Lambchop's Erotic Stories

         - http://www.asstr.org/~Lambchop/