Rogue Review No. 387 - June 5, 1999

NOTICE: If you are easily offended, not of the required legal 
age, or material of an erotic nature is illegal where you are, 
then do not read what follows.

TITLE: A Moving Experience
AUTHOR: Jenny Wanshel
LENGTH: 8,500 words
MAIN CHARACTER: Female
COMBINATION(S): Twosome (1 Female, 1 Male)
ORIENTATION(S): Heterosexual (Female, Male)
RELATIONSHIP(S): Adult Female-Teenage Male
KINK(S): --
SETTING(S): Home
GENRE(S): --
CAUTION(S): --

SUMMARY: Jenny needs some help moving in to her new place.  The 
help she gets, Will, who is about to graduate from high school.  
One thing leads to another and before you know it...

COMMENTARY: This is an extremely arousing story.  Jenny takes her
time and allows the story to unfold.  There isn't an abundance of
sex, but to perfectly honest I found the build up to the sex a 
bit more arousing than the sex itself.

This is a well written story.  The plot flows nicely.  The 
characters seem realistic enough.  Jenny is more vivid than Will,
possibly because the story is told from her perspective.  The 
author also does a very nice job with both the dialogue and 
Jenny's internal monologue.  There are a number of lines that 
made me chuckle or brought a smile to my face.  The only negative
thing I can think of to say about this story is that it is about 
sex and nothing else; in other words it is a stroke story.

Wow, I really enjoyed this story.  It is well written and 
extremely arousing.  I wish all stroke fiction was this well 
written.  I highly recommend that you read this story.  I have 
given it an Excellent.

OBJECTIVE ANALYSIS: 9.5 (out of 10)

         - Arousal: 5/5
         - Editing: 5/5
         - Plot and Characters: 4/5

SUBJECTIVE ANALYSIS: Excellent

LINK(S): A Moving Experience

         - http://www.deja.com/=gh/getdoc.xp?AN=484258691&fmt=raw