Rogue Review No. 405 - July 2, 1999
NOTICE: If you are easily offended, not of the required legal
age, or material of an erotic nature is illegal where you are,
then do not read what follows.
TITLE: Deja Vu
AUTHOR: Ann Douglas
LENGTH: 14,500 words
MAIN CHARACTER: Female
COMBINATION(S): Twosome (Female, Male)
ORIENTATION(S): Heterosexual (Female, Male)
RELATIONSHIP(S): Older Female-Teenage Male
KINK(S): --
SETTING(S): Home
GENRE(S): --
CAUTION(S): --
SUMMARY: Connie, age 55, relives the past in more ways than one
after she meets the 18-year-old grandson of the man who took her
virginity.
COMMENTARY: I think this story will appeal more to women than it
does to men. It is a little slow moving for my tastes. I also
prefer to see a bit more dialogue and a bit less description,
than you will find in this story. While there isn't an abundance
of them, there are enough typographical errors that I was a bit
distracted. Possibly the fact that I was only somewhat aroused
has something to do with my noticing the typos.
OBJECTIVE ANALYSIS: 7.5 (out of 10)
- Arousal: 3/5
- Editing: 4/5
- Plot and Characters: 5/5
SUBJECTIVE ANALYSIS: Good
LINK(S): Deja Vu
- http://www.deja.com/=gh/getdoc.xp?AN=494811599&fmt=raw [1/7]
- http://www.deja.com/=gh/getdoc.xp?AN=494811639&fmt=raw [2/7]
- http://www.deja.com/=gh/getdoc.xp?AN=494811683&fmt=raw [3/7]
- http://www.deja.com/=gh/getdoc.xp?AN=494811721&fmt=raw [4/7]
- http://www.deja.com/=gh/getdoc.xp?AN=494811772&fmt=raw [5/7]
- http://www.deja.com/=gh/getdoc.xp?AN=494813753&fmt=raw [6/7]
- http://www.deja.com/=gh/getdoc.xp?AN=494815169&fmt=raw [7/7]