Rogue Review No. 432 - August 29, 1999

NOTICE: If you are easily offended, not of the 
required legal age, or material of an erotic nature 
is illegal where you are, then do not read what 
follows.

TITLE: Bruce
AUTHOR: Losgud
LENGTH: 12,600 words
MAIN CHARACTER: Male
COMBINATION(S): Twosome (Female, Male)
                Threesome (1 Female, 2 Males)
ORIENTATION(S): Heterosexual (Female, Male)
RELATIONSHIP(S): Brother-Sister
                 Married Couple
KINK(S): Exhibitionism
SETTING(S): Home
            Restaurant
GENRE(S): --
CAUTION(S): --

SUMMARY: Bruce stays with Janice and Harold, his sister and 
her husband, while he is away from home on business.  One 
thing leads to another...

COMMENTARY: This is a very well written and extremely 
arousing story.  The author does a nice job of not cutting 
to the chase too fast.  The tension builds over a series of 
close encounters between Bruce and Janice, until eventually 
something does happen.  Another thing that I like about this 
story is the dialogue.  It reveals things both explicitly 
and implicitly.  I also enjoyed the narrator's sarcastic 
tone.

Of course, if you don't care for stories of incest then this 
may not be for you.  In my opinion, you won't find too many 
incest stories that are written much better than this one.

OBJECTIVE ANALYSIS: 10.0 (out of 10)

        - Arousal: 5/5
        - Editing: 5/5
        - Plot and Characters: 5/5

SUBJECTIVE ANALYSIS: Excellent

LINK(S): Bruce

         - http://www.deja.com/=gh/getdoc.xp?AN=497927197&fmt=raw

         StoriesOnline.net

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