Rogue Review No. 434 - September 7, 1999
NOTICE: If you are easily offended, not of the
required legal age, or material of an erotic nature
is illegal where you are, then do not read what
follows.
TITLE: Cousin Swap
AUTHOR: Titmouse
LENGTH: 3,200 words
MAIN CHARACTER: Male
COMBINATION(S): Twosome (Female, Male)
ORIENTATION(S): Heterosexual (Female, Male)
RELATIONSHIP(S): Unmarried Couples
KINK(S): Partner Swapping
SETTING(S): Car
GENRE(S): --
CAUTION(S): --
SUMMARY: While on a double date, Alec half-jokingly suggests
that Eve and Jody switch partners. He didn't think that
they would actually go for it.
COMMENTARY: This is a fun story. It isn't a very long story
and there isn't too much to it, but like I said it is a fun
read. The author does a good job making both the narrator
and the woman he ends up with, Jody, seem realistic. They
are both eager but they are also both apprehensive, at
first. The author also does a nice job of giving you the
feel of the overall mood inside the car where the two
couples are going at it.
OBJECTIVE ANALYSIS: 9.0 (out of 10)
- Arousal: 4/5
- Editing: 5/5
- Plot and Characters: 5/5
SUBJECTIVE ANALYSIS: Excellent
LINK(S): Cousin Swap
- http://www.deja.com/=gh/getdoc.xp?AN=497039849&fmt=raw