Rogue Review No. 450 - October 17, 1999
NOTICE: If you are easily offended, not of the
required legal age, or material of an erotic nature
is illegal where you are, then do not read what
follows.
TITLE: Revealing Secrets
AUTHOR: Losgud
LENGTH: 7,900 words
MAIN CHARACTER: Male
COMBINATION(S): Twosome (Female, Male)
Threesome (2 Females, 1 Male)
ORIENTATION(S): Heterosexual (Female, Male)
Homosexual (Female)
RELATIONSHIP(S): In-Laws
Married Couple
Sisters
KINK(S): --
SETTING(S): Home
GENRE(S): --
CAUTION(S): --
SUMMARY: Nathan and Ariel, a happily married couple move
back to her hometown. Sylvia, Ariel's sister, soon becomes
a fixture in their lives. Is it because Sylvia enjoys
spending time with her sister or is it because she enjoys
spending time with her brother-in-law? Read the story and
find out.
COMMENTARY: I liked this story a lot. There are a few plot
twists that made it interesting and less predictable. I
enjoyed the narration. Nathan has two qualities that I
liked. One, he has a sense of humor. Two, his reactions to
the curves that are thrown his way seem spontaneous and
unrehearsed. There is one more thing about this story that
impressed me. The author has seen fit to include little
details here and there. These details breathe life into the
characters and the world they live in. This technique, that
the author employs quite skillfully, made the plot and
characters more interesting to me. It also made the story
seem more realistic.
Oh yeah, I almost forgot. There is also some pretty hot sex
in this story; which probably has something to do with why I
liked the story so much. In all honesty, though, if not for
the other things I mentioned earlier in this review, I don't
think that the hot sex would have seemed quite as hot.
OBJECTIVE ANALYSIS: 9.0 (out of 10)
- Arousal: 4/5
- Editing: 5/5
- Plot and Characters: 5/5
SUBJECTIVE ANALYSIS: Excellent
LINK(S): Revealing Secrets
- http://www.deja.com/=gh/getdoc.xp?AN=497927216&fmt=raw [1/1]
Stories Online
- http://www.storiesonline.net/