Rogue Review No. 481 - December 28, 1999

NOTICE: If you are easily offended, not of the 
required legal age, or material of an erotic nature 
is illegal where you are, then do not read what 
follows.

TITLE: Sis On Tape
AUTHOR: Bernard Sagon
LENGTH: 16,400 words
MAIN CHARACTER: Male
COMBINATION(S): Twosome (Female, Male)
ORIENTATION(S): Heterosexual (Female, Male)
RELATIONSHIP(S): Brother-Sister
KINK(S): Voyeurism
SETTING(S): Home
GENRE(S): --
CAUTION(S): --

SUMMARY: Ken catches his sister on videotape, screwing one 
of her professors.  He decides to blackmail her, but things 
don't work out quite as he had planned.

COMMENTARY: There some things about this story that I do 
like.  The author does a credible job setting it up.  The 
sex is arousing.  It is a brother-sister incest story, which 
I often enjoy, even though I don't have any sisters.

There are three things, in particular, that I do not like 
about this story.  One, the pacing of the plot is 
disappointing.  The story just keeps going and going, 
straight ahead, without any breaks.  Two, I am unsatisfied 
with the way everything works out neatly in the end.  The 
premise of the story is unrealistic enough, but I have read 
and enjoyed other stories that were built upon similarly 
unrealistic foundations.  Yet, in this case, I have a hard 
time believing that the world this one takes place in bears 
anything other than a passing resemblance to our own.  
Three, I had a hard time sympathizing with Ken.  Everything 
went his way, so why should I care whether he gets to score 
with his sister or not?  He says that his sister has the 
upper hand when it comes to dealing with their parents, but 
he never really shows it; he only says so.

OBJECTIVE ANALYSIS: 6.0 (out of 10)

        - Arousal: 3/5
        - Editing: 4/5
        - Plot and Characters: 2/5

SUBJECTIVE ANALYSIS: Good

LINK(S): Sis On Tape

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