Rogue Review No. 489 - January 8, 2000

NOTICE: If you are easily offended, not of the 
required legal age, or material of an erotic nature 
is illegal where you are, then do not read what 
follows.

TITLE: Mystery Caller
AUTHOR: The Redoubt
LENGTH: 3,300 words
MAIN CHARACTER: Male
COMBINATION(S): Twosome (Female, Male)
ORIENTATION(S): Heterosexual (Female, Male)
RELATIONSHIP(S): Mother-Son
KINK(S): Phone Sex
SETTING(S): Home
            Work
GENRE(S): --
CAUTION(S): --

SUMMARY: Soon after he buys an answering machine, Steve 
start receiving sexually explicit messages from an unknown 
woman.  The list of suspects includes Cheryl, his mother.

COMMENTARY: Now this is good, very good; no, wait, I think 
its excellent.  There isn't a hell of a lot to it, but I 
like it a lot.  What impresses me the most is how the author 
twists the story toward the end.  I don't want to say 
anymore for fear of giving something away.  I will say that 
what he does do turned, in my opinion, a very good story 
into an excellent one.

On the whole I found this story to be extremely arousing and 
very entertaining.  Keep in mind that I usually enjoy 
stories of consensual incest.  This may have biased me 
toward this story some, but at the same time I think that 
author has done a better than average job.  If you don't 
care for stories of consensual incest then maybe you should 
skip this one, otherwise I highly recommend you read it.

OBJECTIVE ANALYSIS: 9.5 (out of 10)

        - Arousal: 5/5
        - Editing: 5/5
        - Plot and Characters: 4/5

SUBJECTIVE ANALYSIS: Excellent

LINK(S): Mystery Caller

         - http://www.deja.com/=gh/getdoc.xp?AN=569683713&fmt=raw