Rogue Review No. 490 - January 8, 2000
NOTICE: If you are easily offended, not of the
required legal age, or material of an erotic nature
is illegal where you are, then do not read what
follows.
TITLE: The Perfect Pair
AUTHOR: DrSpin
LENGTH: 3,100 words
MAIN CHARACTER: Male
COMBINATION(S): Twosome (Female, Male)
ORIENTATION(S): Heterosexual (Female, Male)
RELATIONSHIP(S): Infidelity
KINK(S): Voyeurism (sort of)
SETTING(S): Home
GENRE(S): --
CAUTION(S): --
SUMMARY: A man becomes obsessed with his coworker's wife's
breasts.
COMMENTARY: This one is a little different, but I like it.
I found it to be only mildly arousing, but I there is much
more to it than just sex. I like the way the author plays
with the main characters; how he has them interact. They
seem very realistic. For example, the narrator did not just
say that he was obsessed, he also seemed obsessed. His
action backed up his words.
As I may have already indicated, this doesn't exactly strike
me as stroke material. It is, however, a fun read and isn't
all that long. I think that most of you should enjoy it.
OBJECTIVE ANALYSIS: 8.5 (out of 10)
- Arousal: 4/5
- Editing: 5/5
- Plot and Characters: 4/5
SUBJECTIVE ANALYSIS: Very Good
LINK(S): The Perfect Pair
- http://assm.asstr.org/Year1999/21288
- http://www.deja.com/=gh/getdoc.xp?AN=549270368&fmt=raw