Rogue Review No. 503 - April 5, 2000
NOTICE: If you are easily offended, not of the
required legal age, or material of an erotic nature
is illegal where you are, then do not read what
follows.
TITLE: Full Custody
AUTHOR: Richard Bissell (a.k.a. MichaelD38)
LENGTH: 8,700 words
MAIN CHARACTER: Male
COMBINATION(S): Twosome (1 Female, 1 Male)
ORIENTATION(S): Heterosexual (Female, Male)
RELATIONSHIP(S): Neighbors
KINK(S): --
SETTING(S): Home
GENRE(S): --
CAUTION(S): --
SUMMARY: At her request and after seriously considering the
situation, thirty-year-old Ian agrees to knock up Christy,
his fifteen-year-old neighbor.
COMMENTARY: I liked this story a lot. The author has done a
beautiful job with the plot and the characters. I was both
physically aroused and emotionally moved while reading it. I
enjoyed the dialogue and the non-verbal interplay between
Ian and Christy. Both characters seemed very realistic. They
were complex and dynamic. They experienced highs and lows.
They had dreams and fears. As I said a few sentences back,
they seemed very realistic.
I can't think of anything negative to say about this story.
It is well written and well edited. I found it to be quite
arousing. Simply put, I don't read too many stories that
impress me as much as this one does. The ending is
bittersweet, but seems appropriate given the tone of the
story up to that point.
I think this story should appeal to both male and female
readers. Given that the pace and tone are a bit sedate, this
story may not play well with readers who prefer to read
wildly kinky stories. Still, I highly recommend you read it.
SUBJECTIVE ANALYSIS: Outstanding
LINK(S): Full Custody
- http://assm.asstr.org/Year2000/23474 [1/2]
- http://assm.asstr.org/Year2000/23475 [2/2]
Author's Archives
- www.asstr.org/~Richard_Bissell/
- www.asstr.org/~MichaelD/