"Intersection" by David Lawrence.

The guy has gone to a party with his younger girlfriend. She seemed bored
there, but she warms up when they park outside her house. After he gives her a
resounding orgasm, he takes a rain check when she offers to do him. This is
because he's already a bit worn out from his earlier activities with Susie, and
possibly with Betty. Then he goes home, finds another chick in his bed, and
sheds his weariness enough to bang her every which way they can before taking
her back to her boyfriend's place. Ah, the mysteries of women and of youth! 

Now I know you teenagers who are not reading this review because you are
prohibited by Law from being on this newsgroup in the first place – I know
you'll find this hard to believe; but there really can be such a thing as too
much sex. It gets boring after a while, when it's done just for pleasure with
no real emotion. Well, maybe not. But the great thing about this story is that
the narrator practically insists that all this serial sex is pointless and just
leads to confusion and broken relationships, but it's still a damned sexy
story. I would even add for the teenagers who are not reading this review that
the best idea is to read this story, enjoy it, have orgasms over it, fantasize
about it, and then not do it, because the negatives the narrator mentions
REALLY do happen, but that wouldn't dissuade anybody, because that's what the
author does already.

The description of the sexual activity is outstanding. The author uses
wonderful imagery.  He also does an excellent job of identifying and describing
emotions. 

From my own perspective as a mature, monogamous, adult female of the species, I
might view this story as a description of good reasons not to be a two-timing
son of a bitch. Someone with a more purely hedonistic inclination might view it
as a description of the good times that can be had by a two-timing son of a
bitch. Never having been a two-timing son of a bitch and never having slept
with one, I can't say for sure; but I think the best way to describe this story
is as a plausible description of the life and adventures of a two-timing son of
a bitch who is not such a bad guy after all.

You can interpret this story any way you want. But you're a real fool if you
don't read it.

I have reviewed a couple of other stories by this author. Since he has reposted
the stories, I'll repost those reviews later in this issue.

Ratings for "Intersection"
Athena (technical quality): 10
Venus (plot & character): 10
Celeste (appeal to reviewer): 10


Obligatory Disclaimer:

"This review is taken from Celestial Reviews by Celeste
(Celeste801@aol.com).  The review was written independently of consultation
with the author and does not imply collaboration."